I ran across a rec for this on one of The Captain and The Doctor rec post and decided to take a look. I have to admit I was impressed that had 50 chapters even before I started reading it because most fan fiction never comes close to reaching true novel length. I loved this story so much I ended up reading the whole thing over the last two days, I loved the way you fleshed out Bones and Jims character while sticking with the XI movie so closely. For me the fact that it was done from Bones view point made it that much better. I also loved the fact that you used a parallel dimension theory instead of and altered timeline like the movie uses, after all each canon Trek series and many of the books and comics have interactions with parallel dimensions so it makes sense, even more since the canon-verse is suppose to have a black ops agency in places to prevent or reverse changes in the timelines. Anyway needless to I love this story since I'm kind of gushing here! It's obvious you could write professionally given a chance and if you ever do just remember you might get a lot of publisher rejections but it only takes one yes and you have more fan reviews for this story then some published authors books ever sell!
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Date: 2011-04-30 03:14 pm (UTC)