Date: 2010-03-05 03:31 am (UTC)
So, this story was AMAZING. Like I pretty much set up an account here so that I could tell you that. I love stories from the Academy era, and this is one of the best I've ever read. You did a great job with the characterizations, and the original characters that you created weren't overbearing, even ones that played prominent rolls (I usually hate when people make up characters). I feel like in a lot of stories, if there's going to be hurt!jim, they focus solely on that, but you did a great job of letting other people have some angst and trauma. And I love that this entire thing was from Bones's point of view.

I'm sure you don't need to be told, but you should be SO proud of yourself for this entire thing. It was epic and amazing.
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