My two favorite scenes were when Jim was thinking about the King's birth and McCoy's complete and utter control and calmness and capability got under his skin and turned unrequited, he thought, into desperate want and then when he holds his daughter and is completely and totally smitten.

Really lovely!

I enjoyed the premise and thought the aliens were believable and how you created mPreg was as well (always a plus in my mind). Uhura's righteous indignation and Spock's knitted booties were delicious add-ons!

Well done!