So this was adorable. I really enjoy the idea of Jim and Bones having a baby together and you made it happen in a way that is "realistic" for the Star Trek verse. The flashback, Bones' discomfort and embarassment, the conversation Jim had with him....all of it made me go aww, poor Bones, and Go Jim! at random intervals. I think you did a very good job with the emotions here.

Also the IMAGES from this last part. Bones as a woman in labor. The joy of having a baby. Their excitement. And the ending was just awwww. The two of them together with Joanna. And I love the image of the rest of the crew being besotted with her. Because they so would be.

Great job and thank you for this little story!