I already have it saved because I'm attached to your awkward sentences since I've read it about, heck I don't even know how many times. At least 100. So I will notice them later. You can ask mijan about how I notice things that change. *g*
My assumption when you mentioned doing it from Jim's POV wasn't that it would be all redone, but maybe a few parts that we never saw (from large gaps) or during particularly poignant times. Like:
I would love to see Jim reading the journals on the Farragut and more of what he went thru.
His thoughts when he was out in the desert and getting back to Bones.
Where he went when he disappeared before the 25th anniversary of the Kelvin/his birthday. And of course all the gooey angst of his time apart from Bones.
And hell yeah, I would LOVE to see Jim's absolute panic during Bones accident.
What Jim is thinking with Bones wearing his ring.
I think you did an amazing job of making us 'see' Jim through Bones eyes. I could go on and on. But you know, anything angsty/hurt comforty you want to throw in there would be lovely.
I still can't put together a coherent thought on the epilogue and didn't want to ramble worse than I usually do, so maybe when I've come out of the corner, *g* I'll send you a message.
Whatever you decide, I have no doubt it will be beautiful.
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My assumption when you mentioned doing it from Jim's POV wasn't that it would be all redone, but maybe a few parts that we never saw (from large gaps) or during particularly poignant times. Like:
I would love to see Jim reading the journals on the Farragut and more of what he went thru.
His thoughts when he was out in the desert and getting back to Bones.
Where he went when he disappeared before the 25th anniversary of the Kelvin/his birthday. And of course all the gooey angst of his time apart from Bones.
And hell yeah, I would LOVE to see Jim's absolute panic during Bones accident.
What Jim is thinking with Bones wearing his ring.
I think you did an amazing job of making us 'see' Jim through Bones eyes. I could go on and on. But you know, anything angsty/hurt comforty you want to throw in there would be lovely.
I still can't put together a coherent thought on the epilogue and didn't want to ramble worse than I usually do, so maybe when I've come out of the corner, *g* I'll send you a message.
Whatever you decide, I have no doubt it will be beautiful.