what an absolute joy. i love the long ones and you gave and gave and with a satisfying conclusion. I'm afraid i neglected to comment on all the earlier chapters because i was so caught up in each one and just wanted more and mroe. It became quite a distraction during my essay writing. silly silly me. i always find the good stories when i'm supposed to be concentrating.
Thanks for writing. and i like your new "Unexpected" too, which i also neglected to comment on.